Film Pitch Feedback

FUAD ASHOR
We presented our film pitch presentation and received generally positive feedback. In doing the presentation, this gave us very useful &valuable comments & views on our overall production which has enabled us to, reconcile various aspects of our trailer production such as casting and if our genre will be, Comedy of sophistication with Art House influences (Juno) or the representative Teen Comedies with humour of a crude nature (American Pie).

Mr. Bush’s Personal Feedback
WWW-
 GOOD PRESENTATION/ FONT & IMAGES
 VERY DETAILED AND THOUGHT-OUT PLOT
 REFERENCES TO CHARACTER THEORIST SUCH AS PROPP
 ENIGMA CODES HAVE BEEN THOUGHT-OUT AND DECIDED
 THE ETHNIC INDENTITY AND CULTRAL DIFFERENCES
 SCENES FOR TRAILER HAVE ALREADY BEEN PLANNED
 ANALYSIS OF OTHER TRAILERS
 RESEARCH ON AUDIENCE

EBI-
 GO LOCATION SPOTTING
 FIND SUITABLE CASTS FOR TRAILER
 MORE DETAIL ON CINEMATOGRAPHY

Questions posed by Mr. Bush
Who decided plot?
Fuad Ashor

Is Jenny an Indian name?
We thought about this and came to conclude that this can either be her nickname or real name due to her being an Indian Christian.

Sum up your film plot in one word?
Well our film plot is bend it like Beckham meets the comical pregnant reality of Juno and the humour characteristics of American Pie.